Yep, page 9 for me was also bandwidth comsumption problems. Damn.
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Yep, page 9 for me was also bandwidth comsumption problems. Damn.
holy shit!!! i got this too and it creeped me the fuck out!!Quote:
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i won't know what you people are talking about until later tomorrow. ass. care to give the gist of things so i have a sense of what's going on (until i see it for myself)? (use the spoiler tag too if you must)
Ashen: Just read it. It's better that way.
That said, it creeped me the hell out. But I've got an active imagination and he's a good writer, so that could just be it. Still...
just finished reading it. nicely written and had me thinking of the blair witch all throughout.
i was ready to call you a bitch if that happened. and i kept waiting for it to pop up too. it would have worked with the build up and descriptions of what was going on.Quote:
And no this isn't another attempt to suprise you with a loud scream
True or not... brrrr.
Very cool story. I really kind of wish it went further though, despite the relevence to how it ended.
looks like a spelunker read too much lovecraft
www.gizmology.net/lovecraft <- pioneer of weird fiction, probably greatest horror writer of all time. Eternal Darkness was loosely based off of his detailed mythos. For the xenophobic or those with an overactive imagination his stuff is total brown-trousers. I recommend "Colour out of Space" for horror and "Shadow over Innsmouth" "Case of Charles Dexter-Ward" or "at the Mountains of Madness" for weird fiction. Usually his longer pieces are better.
Cool, but really wanted sometype of closure.
What destroyed any type of believability for me is that the link on the last page goes to itself.
Odds are if somebody made a page like that, for example you make the last page, you wouldn't make a link to the next page, and have it link to itself.
You'd make the last page, then when you make the next page, at that time (when both pages are completed) you'd go back and would make a link from page 10 to page 11.
(if that makes sense?)
that was a good read, and it sent some chills up my spine. :confused: