Heh, exact same problem. All my ideas end up being too long. I think the shortest thing I could do... and that would be worth doing... would be 40+ pages. Actually, I just remembered a short idea, but it's centered around a car chase and there's no way my skills are up for that.Quote:
Originally Posted by SHiNgO
Magic in modern times... I had an idea that might be crammed into 20 pages. Bascially involves this cafe that captures spirits of deal animals and supernatural creatures and infuses them into the meal, that provides benefits for people who are born with the ability to use magic. For mundanes though there's no effect. The main spirit catcher who works for the place is a mundane boy who wants to be a mage. Then he hears of a legendary spirit that can be combined into a special feast to turn a mundane into a mage. He ends up traveling with the daughter of the boss of the cafe. Her personality and powers change with the vibes of the people around her, so if there are nice people around she's all sweet and angelic, but if she's surrounded by evil people she becomes a goddess of destruction. The setting would basically be like the modern world only with mystical elements. It's an idea I haven't fleshed out much yet.
