More of my comics for the meat grinder.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...anh/1CCBKO.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...nh/1CCBKO2.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...Cpolkatato.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...polkatato2.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...polkatato3.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...polkatato4.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...polkatato5.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...polkatato6.bmp

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Crack kills, son.

Didn't you post your comics before at some time? And didn't everyone hate them?

The robot is the only thing that's even remotely decent from a comic illustration standpoint.

The Burger King King rules.

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Originally Posted by FirstBlood

The robot is the only thing that's even remotely decent from a comic illustration standpoint.

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That's a robot? I thought it was a turtle.

Robot turtle?

comic artists need to stop imatating happy noodle boy. It's not funny anymore.

with that said, the burger king guy is kinda nifty.

drawing skills- don't use pencils. just, dont.

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Originally Posted by FirstBlood

Robot turtle?

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We've unwittingly made his web comic better.

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Originally Posted by Satsuki

drawing skills- don't use pencils. just, dont.

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Atleast ink the fuckers.

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Originally Posted by Andrew

The Burger King King rules.



That's a robot? I thought it was a turtle.

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Yep, robot. He's supposed to vaguely mimic a pair of garden shears stuck to a tin body.

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Originally Posted by Andrew

We've unwittingly made his web comic better.



Atleast ink the fuckers.

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I did...I made light pencil outlines then inked using ballpoint BIC ink pens.

inking with Ballpoint BIC pens doesn't count. Get some microns or something.

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Originally Posted by rezo

inking with Ballpoint BIC pens doesn't count. Get some microns or something.

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Can they be ordered online?

edit: NM, i found their site.

I don't know why everyone's so beholden with Microns. Comparative to other pens I've had, they bleed like tuesday night hookers at the governor's mansion.

I'm not beholden to microns. I only use them for making panel borders and lettering.

I just don't know the name of any other kind of art pen off of the top of my head. =\

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Originally Posted by rezo

inking with Ballpoint BIC pens doesn't count. Get some microns or something.

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Why doesn't a ballpoint pen "count"?

I have been using some of them crazy micron pens lately. The quality is nice, but they are really uncomfortable in my hand. I hold my writing utensils really tightly, so that edge around where the cap clicks on hurts my fingers.

Rapidographs

Know them. Love them.

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Originally Posted by Kidnemo

Why doesn't a ballpoint pen "count"?

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Just because they aren't dark enough.

I have good results with Uni-Ball micro ballpoint pens.

They are quite a bit nicer than the average bic though.

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The Burger King King rules.

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If by that you mean you dig the commercials...no he doesn't. Especially the one where he is sitting in bed next to a guy. Worst ad campaign ever. That and a Hootie singing cowboy hurts too.

I love those commercials. They're so creepy and they work because we're talking about them right now.

He rules.

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Originally Posted by Bacon McShig

I don't know why everyone's so beholden with Microns. Comparative to other pens I've had, they bleed like tuesday night hookers at the governor's mansion.

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Never had that problem, but I usually stuck with .005 for all my lines.

Also, the comic is just no.

Once I went Micron, I never went back to anything else. these things are godpens.

God doesn't need pens. He just thinks and the words appear on the page.

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Originally Posted by Bacon McShig

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Crack kills, son.

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:rolleyes: Oh get a grip, already. Like that was any weirder or random than anything on adult swim or say, a Jhonen Vasquez toon. If you want a real "crack" toon that makes no sense, watch the Busta Rhymes episode of Space Ghost.

That's Old Kentucky Shark..and he's been there.

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Originally Posted by Dylan1CC

:rolleyes: Oh get a grip, already. Like that was any weirder or random than anything on adult swim or say, a Jhonen Vasquez toon. If you want a real "crack" toon that makes no sense, watch the Busta Rhymes episode of Space Ghost.

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It's not that it was random or wierd, it's that it was trying so hard to be those that it showed. It was bad because it came off like there was supposed to be a flow and you tried forcing humor into the situation by adding odd things. The whole first half is a joke based on things going wrong complete with a punchline, so instead of random it's just a terrible joke. Done in animation with quick cuts it might work, but as a strip it doesn't.

SGC2C is good random because it makes no sense. It's obvious the show has no goal, runs in circles, and the interviews come off as though the one being questioned was asked a bunch of stuff and then a totally different set of questions was added to the mix later on.

But then, you've now removed the comic.

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Originally Posted by Andrew

God doesn't need pens. He just thinks and the words appear on the page.

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Oh and God can't erase pen. Nobody can, it's just how they work.

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Originally Posted by Dylan1CC

whatevah

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Weak.

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Originally Posted by Dylan1CC

:rolleyes: Oh get a grip, already. Like that was any weirder or random than anything on adult swim or say, a Jhonen Vasquez toon. If you want a real "crack" toon that makes no sense, watch the Busta Rhymes episode of Space Ghost.

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Please. No amount of comparitive perspective could make your comic not be horrible.

For what it's worth - if you put your work out on display you are gonna have to deal with the criticisms, regardless of if they are good or bad, tis the nature of the beast.

I can't really coment on your stuff as you took it down, but I remember the drawing of the BurgerKing looking suitably disturbing, just like the badass commercials.

I didnt read it, but its better than Joystick Adventures.

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Weak.

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Lame.

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Originally Posted by diffusionx

I didnt read it, but its better than Joystick Adventures.

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Totally.

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Originally Posted by diffusionx

I didnt read it, but its better than Joystick Adventures.

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No, mine were atleast coloured.

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Originally Posted by Bacon McShig

Please. No amount of comparitive perspective could make your comic not be horrible.

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Dang, at least two people in this thread are flippin' rude. I accept if you don't like it, obviously the humor isn't to everyone's taste but no need to beat me down. How'd you like it if I pissed all over a comic you drew in the same derogatory quick-zing posts? At least Mech is giving me some detailed pointers.

Anyways, I'm posting it back, warts 'n all.

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It's not that it was random or wierd, it's that it was trying so hard to be those that it showed. It was bad because it came off like there was supposed to be a flow and you tried forcing humor into the situation by adding odd things. The whole first half is a joke based on things going wrong complete with a punchline, so instead of random it's just a terrible joke. Done in animation with quick cuts it might work, but as a strip it doesn't.

SGC2C is good random because it makes no sense. It's obvious the show has no goal, runs in circles, and the interviews come off as though the one being questioned was asked a bunch of stuff and then a totally different set of questions was added to the mix later on.

But then, you've now removed the comic.

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It's back. Lost my temper a bit.

Anyways, I was only referring to the Busta Rhymes/grocery store "trip" episiode as a centered example, all other episodes of the show I find wonderfully structured.

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The whole first half is a joke based on things going wrong complete with a punchline

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Ok, I'm a bit confused, which part do you feel was where the punchline came in too early or are you referring to the John Cleese line (which is supposed to be a quick reference to the "dead parrot" sketch)?

Also, One thing I can tell now as far as character reaction, when the hippie is looking back and forth at the squirrel, it might have helped if his mouth were shut and not wide open all the time. I can see how that would make it go from "annoyed customer" to "shocked pedestrian" way too fast and look like his fear is forced.

And yeah, I often imagine what the strips would look like animated before I start drawing them.

It's interesting you feel it comes off as as an adult swim toon because I'm trying to go the opposite direction by NOT writing dirty humor or cursing in my 'toons which isn't easy as the Chaps brothers have said.

Some extra ones:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...olkafried3.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v223/dylanh/1cclw.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...anh/1cclw2.bmp

A Star Wars spoof I drew last month:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...1CCrevenge.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...CCrevenge2.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...CCrevenge3.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...CCrevenge4.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...CCrevenge5.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...CCrevenge6.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...CCrevenge7.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...CCrevenge8.bmp

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...CCrevenge9.bmp