I wasn't trying to be mean. Just offer up some objective criticism. You rarely draw ridged objects, so I thought maybe Yeller is week on that, and wants a push.
as it stands, the guitar kind of takes you out of the picture. Other than lacking detail, the perspective is off on it. The body sets at an angle, but the neck is flat, making the neck look like a piece of cardboard. At that angel, you probably should see the neck pocket where the neck connects to the body. The neck looks like it setting at an angle other than 90 degrees with the bridge. And the angles of the points of the flying V are bad off. But the worst offender if you have a fret board going all the way down to the butt of the guitar. I'd probably not noticed how bad the guitar was if not for that catching my eye.
But maybe you were just doodling. Well, if that was the goal, leave the strings off and get the angel of the neck right and have the fret board end at a reasonable place. Done. Easy peasy
here is some source material if you want to redo it. A real flying V, some gorillaz doodles, and a pic of raptor.
