Hey new guy! Glad to see you throwin' in!
Advice I'd give ya, is this: start practicing at drawing smoother lines. It looks like you're really nervous about committing to a line, kind of making little scratches with your index finger and thumb*. Try keeping the pencil down on the paper. If you need to do the scritcy stuff to get the form down, do it super-light on the page first, then go in with your darker bold mesquite bbq flavor style lines. DELICIOUS
Word up, sah.

