So what exactly have I been doing these past several months when I've been away from TNL? Writing my ass off, at least for the prior two weeks. In 2004 I posted up a start to a novel I was planning to write called "Struggle for Supremacy". I suppose sometime in 2007 I looked over what I had previously written as I was interested in finishing it but it was quite poor and I started over again from scratch. I took a good eight months off of it, possibly longer but recently have started hammering it out again.
I've always enjoyed writing but I've had trouble sticking to something (no matter what it may have been) but in the past year I'm having an easier time staying focused on only a few things instead of constantly bouncing around from interest to interest.
Anyways, the reason I'm making this thread is to get some opinions on what I have written so far and get some honest criticisms. I've attached two copies of the book to this post (both in .doc format), the first one being the original and the second being the current. I'd compare the two to Batman and Robin vs Batman Begins. I figured that it would show my progression as a writer (that I hope I have made). I wouldn't bother reading the entire original but I'd greatly appreciate it if a few TNLers could read the current copy and let me know what they think of what I have done so far.
