Chain-smoking schoolgirls is enough incentive for me.
First off, the pages are HUGE. I'm looking at it right now with a monitor set to high rez, but I can't even imagine what they'll look like on the 800x600 at work. Scale them down, mayabe about half the size.
Also, the text sticks out a lot, being solid black when the next darkest color is a sort of dark grey. Either lighten the text or darken the comic. Proably best to meet about half way with the text a little lighter and the comic a little darker.
The art and the story is great, especially the tale the one kid tells of the old lady eating lion. Also like how each little event flows together well. A fun read.
The html as is works fine. Only thing you might want to do is either thumbnail or organize the archive in some way so someone can easily tell where they left off last if they fall behind in reading or something.
"I've watched while the maggots have defiled the earth. They have
built their castles and had their wars. I cannot stand by idly any longer." - Otogi 2
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