Looks pretty good. The anatomy seems a bit...approximated, but the fingers were drawn very well (I always find it difficult to get fingers to look natural unless their fisted). I'm not exactly certain what's happening with the clothes either...it looks like an open shirt, but then he has bandages around his stomach, and they go over one side of his shirt and not the other?
I probably wouldn't use the hatch lines for shadow, though, it's a little distracting in a contour line drawing...I'd just shade them in like you did with his hair and shirt.
Good work!
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