I like it very much. You have a very nice use of line variation and black space. It gives the cloth a lot of volume (like, it doesn't look flat, or just layered over the form), which is a nice touch.
A few things, though: We're looking at the character pretty much straight on, so the way his body is slanted to the left looks a little unnatural. I see how you're going for the contrapposto, but it's not quite right. Also, no feet? Not a big deal, just as long as you don't do it all the time, or as an excuse to avoide proper leg placement (although, they look good now). Last thing, the tie in his sash doesn't seem to be from anything...like, the sash isn't compressing into the knot at all, the knot is just sitting on top.
Otherwise, nice work. Do you ink them eventually?
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