The Shadow of Prea needs some editing still, especially comma usage.
Stories: part of Chapter 1 of the Treasure of Mudrock Island is uploaded and attached. The links go to the Shadow of Prea, chapters 1-3. It's all I have typed up of those yet, I prefer to write longhand. Then when I go over it and type it up, I do a kind of running edit, where improvements are made all around. I've got to kind of reconcile chapter 3 with 1 and 2. It's in progress and I kind of left it alone for too long.
The Shadow of Prea - Chapter 1.
The Shadow of Prea - Chapter 2.
The Shadow of Prea - Chapter 3. (Unfinished)
There, I've finished chapter 1 of Mudrock. Still have to edit the quotes right, but I'm going to blaze on. I like this one way better than the other, for the time being.
Last edited by Cowutopia; 23 Jul 2007 at 10:13 AM.
The Shadow of Prea needs some editing still, especially comma usage.
Revive, please.
Cowutopia, did you ever do anything with Treasure of Murdock Island? I would have liked to see where it went. Would be cool if it were told in first-person, too.
I've got some roughdrafts I'll post soon. Right now I'm finishing up a roughdraft about an underground sex club. Post stuff!
Whoa, someone remembers mudrock!
Yeah I've got work on it, but nothing I'm really ready to show. Brisco...one day I'll look at your shit. I mean it.
I fucking love post 12.
Brisco, I think your Hero story has a really cool layout concept - how the chapters are numbered by attachment and the chapter names are the file names for the attachments.
Same here. Your poems all have good rhythm, btw.
Here's one of a few short stories I've worked on the past week. I'll post the others once I spend some time revising them and quit starting new ones right away.
Last edited by Glitch; 25 Jun 2009 at 01:56 AM.
I don't know why, but I love that line.Inside the bag it’s Christmas day, and I ask April how much she’s wanting to spend
Great flow. Nice fucked-up ending. I was going to complain that I saw the ending coming a mile away until I realized... well, until I realized. Either way, I enjoyed it.
Good jorb!
Cool, I'm glad you liked it.
Here's my underground sex club story, which I'd love to add some more meat to and make novel-sized.
Last edited by Glitch; 25 Jun 2009 at 01:56 AM.
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