Totally.Originally Posted by diffusionx
Lame.Originally Posted by Revoltor
Time for a change
Totally.Originally Posted by diffusionx
"Chuy, you're going to have a magical life. Because no matter where you go, it's always going to be better than Tucson."
No, mine were atleast coloured.Originally Posted by diffusionx
Originally Posted by rezo
Dang, at least two people in this thread are flippin' rude. I accept if you don't like it, obviously the humor isn't to everyone's taste but no need to beat me down. How'd you like it if I pissed all over a comic you drew in the same derogatory quick-zing posts? At least Mech is giving me some detailed pointers.Originally Posted by Bacon McShig
Anyways, I'm posting it back, warts 'n all.
It's back. Lost my temper a bit.Originally Posted by MechDeus
Anyways, I was only referring to the Busta Rhymes/grocery store "trip" episiode as a centered example, all other episodes of the show I find wonderfully structured.
Ok, I'm a bit confused, which part do you feel was where the punchline came in too early or are you referring to the John Cleese line (which is supposed to be a quick reference to the "dead parrot" sketch)?The whole first half is a joke based on things going wrong complete with a punchline
Also, One thing I can tell now as far as character reaction, when the hippie is looking back and forth at the squirrel, it might have helped if his mouth were shut and not wide open all the time. I can see how that would make it go from "annoyed customer" to "shocked pedestrian" way too fast and look like his fear is forced.
And yeah, I often imagine what the strips would look like animated before I start drawing them.
It's interesting you feel it comes off as as an adult swim toon because I'm trying to go the opposite direction by NOT writing dirty humor or cursing in my 'toons which isn't easy as the Chaps brothers have said.
Some extra ones:
A Star Wars spoof I drew last month:
Last edited by 1CCOSA; 10 Jun 2005 at 02:56 AM.
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