not a bad pic by any means, but I think the chest/torso area is out of proportion with his head and arms and that makes it seem less believable. The level of detail you,ve gone into is good though and you get creit for that. the one last comment id give is the way youve shaded his hair doesnt make the hair look real/fluid. Instead of shading like you've done try to follow the contours of the head or at least make the shading youve done more consistent.
keep at it bro and yes it does suck running out of paper Im using the opposite side of paper in old sketchbooks right now.
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