
Originally Posted by
buttcheeks
exaggeration isn't a very good word to describe what he is talking about. The writer is being colorful in a way to sway opinion. He throws in little tidbits that are kind of like comparing apples and apples, oranges and oranges, except one is a plain orange and the other is dressed like a clown.
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I think that if the Framers went to Capitol Hill today
It has become this sad session of members sitting down and drinking Kool-Aid delivered by Karl Rove
his eyes wide and full of astonished, impotent rage, like a rape victim. His skin is as white as the belly of a fish; he hasn't seen the sun in seven years.
pee in their faces
James Sensenbrenner Jr., an ever-sweating, fat-fingered beast....perhaps to beat prostitutes to death.
It's pretty obvious on the last one. He tells you that Sensenbrenner is beast and beats prostitutes to death before you learn about any of his real misdeeds. He is leading the reader. Half the time it is with factual info, which is good, but he stops along the way to lead them with colorful phrases, which is bad.
But whatever. Lets not derail the thread talking about writing style. It has been made clear in previous threads that you enjoy this writing style, and some of us do not.
I was seriously impressed to see you post this. Seriously. Good form.
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