Not bad, MechDeus. Some pretty solid drawings here.
Final Shot: Nice relationships on his right arm. It's nice how you got a good angle change at the wrist, and the hand is working pretty well. The perspective on the gun needs some work though. You might try tilting it and showing more of the gun, since the angle you've got it at now is pretty uninteresting, and hard to draw at the same time. I'd also give him a little more definition in the torso area as he's looking pretty womanly. Your attention to detail is great though, nice design on the belt/skirt thing.
Lemon: The legs need work here. Her overall pose is pretty unnatural, giving her no real sense of weight. If you want her left leg bent at the knee (in sort of "typical" girlish fashion), turn it so we can really see whats going on. It'll be much easier to make it read. If you want her to look tough, make the whole pose reflect that-the arms and the legs seem to be doing completely different things. Again, nice details like the buckles on the torso area.
Soldier: Nice stance, much better here. The overall rhythym/line of action is really nice. Other than reminding me a little too much of that thing from Metal Gear Solid I think it's a good design. Nice plates/interlocking parts, and the hands are great here. I like the foot design as well. You could tilt the torso forward a tad though. (to the left in the image) Good stuff.
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