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Originally posted by Andrew
GAHUCK! ANAL SAX AND INBRED HICKZ! HARDY HAR!!!!!!!!
At any rate, I will critique your drawings to belittle what little ability you have.
Harvest Stool:
The boogers do not look realistic and the puppy looks like a stuffed rendition of a poorly drawn snoopy. Very droll. The pitchfork seems to be going behind him, yet coming out of his ass (suitable to you, no doubt). Ever hear of using a ruler to align points?
The character model of a whole lacks any sort of texture. Lines is your big 'thing'? Right? I mean, put some lines here, put some lines there... wow! A shirt, no less! How about a little tear off hear and we'll draw something underneath it. I'm at a loss here guys, what should I draw under it? More lines? WOW! GREAT IDEA!
The boots are not uniform in size with one ankle being stouter than the other. While the eyes suffer from the same inability to align or put anything into some sort of perspective.
The harvest stool sign does not look like wood grain, but some sort of poorly drawn oyster. Any sort of drapery is not present while the puddles in the background look as though they're vertically up and down.
Personal Passtime (fucking men) Picture:
The figures themselves are awkward. The back of the character portraying you has unordinary humps. Perhaps you should seek medical attention. The form of your anal partner (supposed to be diffx in this rendering, but obviously a fabricated blow up doll) is totally inacurate and should have been redrawn before inked.
The eyes on both of the faces (or glasses) are far too far up the head. The eyes are in the middle of a human beings head, not the top. Since you were going for realism to capture your passion passtime, it's not done well.
Your pictures are not good enough to be acclaimed, nor shitty or unique enough to be considered stylized. I think you should go back to the drawing board and try to reformat your pictures.
2/10 stars with a 2 star margin for error.
Well,first off I didnt draw in pencil then ink.I used a pen from the start.