That's IF I change it more. Odds are, I'll leave it as-is and chalk it up to experience.
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That's IF I change it more. Odds are, I'll leave it as-is and chalk it up to experience.
No, experience implies that you might learn from it and change things.
You have not, and will never change, so chalk it up to stubborness, if anything.
Actually, I've changed my reviewing style numerous times after getting feedback that I felt was useful.
Prove it.
Well, since the critiques for reviews that led to me changing my style are no longer online, I'll go on memory and hope it ends up well. Let's see... I changed from sectioned reviews to non-sectioned ones two years ago after being prompted to show more freedom in reviews. Then I was advised to make my reviews longer due to details and info being lost in shorter reviews. Finally, I was given advice to show more excitement in reviews, which I did for a while, and then stopped since I found that I left out tons of info when I did that.
Jeremy, instead of taking their comments as insults, why don't you take it as constructive criticism? It's pretty obvious they are giving valid dislikes to your review. Maybe, you need to write your review in a program like Word, which if you right click any word, it does have a Synonym pop up.
Also, proof reading to find these repetitive terms is not a bad idea. I like your review, but it also lacks a lot of style. Sometimes if you don't have the technical know-how, you can make a review on how you speak to the viewer and carry yourself through writing alone.
Still at it Jezza?Quote:
Originally posted by MVS
Do you want to know why?
Because you repeat yourself. Over and over and over and over and over again.
MVS - the amount of times I've pointed this fact out to Jeremy (well twice actually) makes me think he'll never learn. It's amazing that even a talking to from Matt Van Stone himself isn't enough to convince him to try harder.
But then what do I know, I'm only a writer...
Never learn? I have no desire to learn how to write like MVS or Ninjas. I'm HAPPY writing the way I do.
And we're happy with you not writing at all.Quote:
Originally posted by Jeremy
Never learn? I have no desire to learn how to write like MVS or Ninjas. I'm HAPPY writing the way I do.
That's ironic, because after reading your reviews I often contemplate shooting myself in the face - your lack of talent just completely overwhelms me. I still think "Jeremy" is a joke account, btw.Quote:
Originally posted by Jeremy
You two seriously make me just want to end my fucking life right now.
Here:
You can cut a lot of that out, thus stopping me from wasting even more of my life reading this shit. Try this:Quote:
Originally posted Jeremy
The graphics are fantastic in most places, but the game does occasionally show its Dreamcast roots, which isn’t always a bad thing, but in some cases, it is.
That's all you need.Quote:
The graphics are fantastic in most places, but the game does occasionally show its Dreamcast roots.
This is just you being completely fucking retarded - it's just a waste of time for me and anyone else who felt compelled to read this piece of verbal feces. In the future, try to not be so dumb.Quote:
Originally posted by Jeremy
...which isn't always a bad thing, but, in some cases, it is.