I dig the comic Andrew. The only suggestion I have art wise would be to widen the comic just a bit so you could keep the first floating frame from overlapping Mr. Sega's face. That is the only weakness I see design wise. I like the joke, & I know humor is hard to translate, so good job.
You should post some of the older comics, & maybe we could chime in on weather they are dated or not. It could possibly give you fresh perspective on them.
JM
