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Yeah, I did a little more work on it. Pizza stains and rumbled corner marks were edited out, along with a few sections that wouldn't make any sense until it's completed.
Input, please? I've no idea how to go about with the rest of it.
http://users.zoominternet.net/~nessa/Stipv1wb.jpg
Wow... that's really good.
I'm scared of it; I don't like the way he's looking at me.
Looks very nice, although it could have used a few more highlights in the hair. This doesn't detract from the overall piece, however.
I never thought anything that cool could come of my face. I love it.
Then again, you already knew that. ;)
I can't wait to see the others you've started.
Floating head... ground him with some detail in the shoulders/neck
Yeah, it's not finished, obviously. I moved it to my own artdump thread, as I've started a few more. I seem addicted to stippling stuff... My poor hand.Quote:
Originally Posted by FirstBlood
I did add in some shoulder/neck work, but I've yet to scan it. Meh, I'm lazy.
Oh, and I love how you have taken all of your lines away (not counting the unfinished parts, of course.) I see outlining quite a bit, and it takes a bit of the realism out of the work.
Nomi: Less is more. It will look 100x better if you leave it as it is. It looks designer-like if you have lots of white space. That way the focus is firmly on the face.
Maybe crisp out the shoulder lines like the other lines for consistency, but adding shoulders and stuff and a background would probably ruin a good piece of work.