Shenmue II

LOL · 12 Jun 2003, 04:16 AM

Originally posted by Jeremy
I do revise my reviews quite a bit

Unless you're lying to the boards like a jackass again, post them.

**sleeve** · 12 Jun 2003, 04:20 AM

Fine.

Back to writing sloppy, lazy, poorly-written reviews with no hope of ever improving, then.

Off you go.

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If you change your mind, you may do my assignment, post this review, and then revise it several times to my liking. I will send you editing marks privately if you like.

Once you have finished, I will send you the book as reward for your hard work.

If you truly love writing as much as you say you do, you will take me up on my offer.

**Jeremy** · 12 Jun 2003, 04:29 AM

omfgninjas, I'm not posting EVERY reworked review. I'll, at most, post one or two.

**sleeve** · 12 Jun 2003, 04:32 AM

No.

Don't waste bandwidth by flooding the Reader Review board with crappy drafts of your old reviews. I won't allow it.

Instead, just cut this review down to 800 words.

Come on, Jeremy. What could you possibly have to lose?

**burgundy** · 12 Jun 2003, 04:34 AM

Originally posted by Jeremy
Well, if I could actually read books, I might take you up on it.

**sleeve** · 12 Jun 2003, 04:37 AM

check...mate!

**Jeremy** · 12 Jun 2003, 04:37 AM

Burg, neato. Sleeveboy, I already said I'll cut this thing down. I've got a rough sketch in my head now of what to cut out. Aside from the 2309803908 uses of character and the like.