Hero: It was funny enough and given that most comics are barely chuckle worthy it stands up pretty well. The only bit of constructive criticism I have to add is that you should work on placing your lowecase i's further away from other letters. They're kinda hard to see right now.


. Oh, but are you sure you want to make it a three panel funny instead of four? A three panel strip just feels a bit... restrained. You can do so much more with four panels, Hero.


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