The hood of my crashed car.
What exactly is that "Most expensive abstract Photo I've ever taken"?
OUCH.
I thought it was like, water droplets and you dropped your camera into the water after the picture.
Last edited by ChaoofNee; 16 Nov 2006 at 01:01 PM.
Yeah. Get rid of the fucking glowing edges.
Agreed.
I just thought the text needed something else... I still don't know what, though.
It needs a better font, for starters.
Your drawing isn't very good. You'd be better off just using the original photo and making it all lame & high-contrasty.
Why is the rising sun purple? Keep it red & white, and maybe incorporate that color scheme into the text.
You're going color crazy. Keep it simple until you actually learn what works & what doesn't.
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I like shotguns.
They're more educational than fucking school.
C.W. Post: It's like a boarding pass to grad school.
www.joesartgoeshere.com/comic/
Yeah, I might be doing a comic here, but just 'cause I like drawing cartoony. If i'm going to succeed, I've gotta do it a lot. here's an excuse!
Comment on site design, please. that's what I'm most concerned about.
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