Creative Writing

[Razor Ramon]

Brian, it'll take me a bit longer than expected but I'm still hammering it out. PATIENCE! INCREASE YOUR TOLERANCE!

[B-Ri]

we are all lucky, the teacher shocked me today when he told me its due next friday!!! AHHHH.

Then he was talking about delaying it till the day of the final, and people were whining saying they dont have time to finish it NEXT week....

..i just told them to finish it THIS week like they planned and sit on it, JEES, and yeah a large portion of the class wanted it on the last day, so alas,

hurry your damn ass up mofo.

[Razor Ramon]

You'll have it by tomorrow, no doubt. I'll try to post it up as early as I possibly can but I have a job interview so I don't know if I can get it here on the AM or in the afternoon. Rest assured, you'll have it by tomorrow.

I would've finished and posted today but I'm leaving school soon to prepare some pieces for tomorrow. It's still a possibility I can post it by tonight, though, but no internet at home makes that hard.

[Drewbacca]

Never trust a creative writer. They always have legitimate sounding excuse, and a lot of them.

[B-Ri]

Never trust a creative writer. They always have legitimate sounding excuse, and a lot of them.

i now believe this news.

[Doc Holliday]

We're getting scolded by Robobo. Ouch.


EDIT: Where's Season 2?

[Drewbacca]

I'm too lazy late at night to do it. I spend most of my time doing freelance and working.

[Razor Ramon]

Here ya go, I had to redo it to be just a dialogue because the original short story was falling apart and I didn't have time to redo it. This should work, though:

[A man wakes up blindfolded. He’s bound to a chair, his hands tied behind his back. His clothes are tattered and is struggling to recognize his surroundings]
Man 1: (thinking) Why am I here? How did I get here in the first place? Oh God, my head is killing me. I can’t see anything. And that smell. It smells like mold. The air tastes wet. Where am I?
[Another man comes into the basement, walking down the stairs.]
Man 2: I see you’re finally awake. I heard you struggling upstairs and I thought it was time to put an end to this.
Man 1: What do you want?
Man 2: Isn’t that the question of the day? Are you comfortable?
Man 1: Please! I will give you whatever you want just let me go!
[Man 2 pulls out a cigarette. With a quick flick he ignites it with his lighter.]
Man 2: [Taking a drag of his cigarette] You’re trying to bribe your way out of this one? Really? That’s your fucking problem. You always think you can buy your way out of any situation no matter how serious it is. That’s why you’re here.
Man 1: What the hell are you talking about, man? Listen, I didn’t do shit. I don’t know what you’re…
Man 2: Shut up! [He smacks Man 1] How dumb do you think I am? Would I put you here if I wasn’t sure about what you did? Ask yourself that. Ask yourself what’s the darkest, most revolting thing you’ve done in your life and I bet you’ll know what I’m talking about.
Man 1: [His eyes widen] You don’t…You can’t mean…
Man 2: I knew all you needed was just a small reminder of what went down. That’s what got you in my radar. When I heard of what you’ve done, I couldn’t let you walk around in the world unpunished. It’s not fair to the family you broke apart and the person you hurt.
And to think, she trusted you. I tried to tell her not to but she did anyway. She was young. Naïve. She couldn’t know any better, but you did. That’s why you chose her. Like a hawk spying on its prey before it dives down to attack, you waited. Spied on her like she were a fucking project of yours. And when the time was right, you made your move.
Man 1: She wanted to help the cause…
Man 2: [Angry] Bullshit! She didn’t know the cost of helping you.
Man 1: She did. That’s why she was so set on making me happy, you motherfucker…
[Man 2 takes a hard swing at Man 1. Man 1 gasps hard for air, spitting out the blood.]
Man 2: You have no shame at all. None at all! You took an innocent girl, filled her with your lies, and then made her get rid of the product you both made for your own profit. Don’t you have any iota of regret about what you’ve done?
Man 1: You accuse me with your high and mighty tone that I was wrong for doing it, but she knew what the plan was from the beginning. She wanted to help by donating whatever she could and we both made that agreement from the start.
Man 2: She’s devastated! She’s only 20! She didn’t know what she was getting herself into.
Man 1: Bullshit, she knew what would happen once we aborted the pregnancy. She even had plans on what to do with the money. It’s not my fault she regretted it once she went through with it.
Man 2: What you two did wasn’t even humane. All you two wanted was the money.
Man 1: Why? Because we wanted money for something we created? Please, it was something we both created and were sure we didn’t want. We wanted to do some good. This way was win-win.
[Man 2 removes Man 1’s blindfold]
Man 1: [stunned] You?!
Man 2: That’s right. I gather by your expression she told you all about me.
Man 1: I saw your picture on her mantle but she told me you were long gone.
Man 2: That’s just what she wanted ever since she ran away from home.
Man 1: So what do you want now? She already chose her life. I didn’t make her do nothing! She wanted it to!
Man 2: Liar!
[Man 2 kicks Man 1square in the chest, knocking him back.]
Man 1: [coughing] So is this making you feel better? Your whore of a daughter lies to you and you want to take it out on me? Who made you the valiant knight in this story? From what she told me you were the one who kicked her out for not following your rules.
Man 2: She was going against God! She knew what would have happened if she didn’t abide by my rules.
Man 1: And that’s why she left and found me. And we were great together! That year when we were together, never leaving one another’s side, we were magical.
Man 2: Yeah, and then you fucked it up. My baby was innocent until she met you! You ruined her! She could’ve been someone!
Man 1: Listen to yourself, you’re making her out to be a saint. Did you know exactly what she was into? According to her, you drove her to heroine. She was so upset that you kicked her out of your house because you didn’t want her dating that she sought out a panacea for her problems. She rode the dragon all because of you! I may not have been the ideal man she thought I could be but don’t you dare talk down to me on your pedestal of shit.
Man 2: [crying] What the hell do you know?! I would’ve done anything for her! Anything! But you got her hooked on your junk, got her pregnant, aborted it and then sold the remains for stem-cell research. That pushed her over the edge. She’s close to killing herself because of your bullshit and I’m about to do the world a favor.
[Man 2 reaches into his jacket where a holster lays hidden and pulls out a gun. He pulls the hammer back.]
Man 2: That’s it. I pray that God gives you the punishment you deserve.
Man 1: Don’t put your agenda on God. You chose to do this. Just like your daughter and I chose what happened to that unborn child. If you’re going to do something, at least be man enough to take the heat on what you do. It was you who drove your daughter away, not God. And God isn’t the one holding that gun at me. It’s all you. I may be gone, but you better fucking realize that what you’re about to is on your head. God ain’t gonna see this as a justified action.
Man 2: How the fuck would you know that? You’ve lived in sin all of your life.
Man 1: Sins are sins all the same. You’re no better than I am…
[A large bang resonates through the basement. Then silence]

[B-Ri]

Thanks for those who sent me some stuff to work with, but due to a lot of reasons i was unable to shoot them. I will hold on to them though, and if i plan on using them in the future will be sure to ask permission of you guys again before i do so.

At the same time in exactly a week i start classes up again, and this semester i actually have a real crew, much more equipment (now working on film), and budgets, so if you guys had any more writings or wanted to do more, i am open to considering them.

Thanks!

[Drewbacca]

And to think I let you use my thread for nothing. I was going to lock the thing on you originally but people actually started replying before I could do it so I left it alone. Looks like not going with my gut was a mistake, quitter.

EDIT: This thread has proved very valuable. I've sourced almost all the books recommended to me and plan on reading them in February.